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一
这虚空就像息壤，诗人在此融汇，文词的种子在此播撒，静待诗歌发芽。

二
虚空，天书无字，一念不生。

三
有一位诗人，他用辞藻将虚空铺满。内含之意挑战了理智，洋溢之情浸润了自我。

四
缪斯女神是小丑，运气坏来不仔细
瞧这虚空空复满，诗人活泼文采足

五
这首诗，你读得开心，我便感激。这�... See more

一
这虚空就像息壤，诗人在此融汇，文词的种子在此播撒，静待诗歌发芽。

二
虚空，天书无字，一念不生。

三
有一位诗人，他用辞藻将虚空铺满。内含之意挑战了理智，洋溢之情浸润了自我。

四
缪斯女神是小丑，运气坏来不仔细
瞧这虚空空复满，诗人活泼文采足

五
这首诗，你读得开心，我便感激。这首诗，充饥足矣，我心欢喜。
可，
如果永远不会有人读这首诗，或许会有人在虚空的隅隙内，看着它，藏在那，轰鸣着，四溅着，在终焉的句点怒放着。

This rendition flows nicely. A few places still have room for further "推敲", e.g. "reckless" in the original text might require a bit stronger term than "不仔细"? All is all, nicely done! ▲ Collapse
 


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