Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
presence
Chinese translation:
业务点；市场实力/市场份额
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TRANS4CHINA
Mar 27, 2010 03:07
14 yrs ago
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presence
English to Chinese
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We’ve doubled our presence.
After Shanghai, xxx offers China the services of its Global Delivery Center at Chengdu.
这里double presence直接意思是双倍的存在，因为包括上海和成都两地
xxx has been operational in China through its center at Shanghai. With the Chengdu Global Delivery Center up and running, xxx further strengthens its international and China presence, giving businesses access to an extensive and game-changing portfolio of IT and BPO services.
这里的presence译为地位应该没问题：进一步加强了其在国际上和在中国的地位
总之两处都不好措词，大家有何建议
After Shanghai, xxx offers China the services of its Global Delivery Center at Chengdu.
这里double presence直接意思是双倍的存在，因为包括上海和成都两地
xxx has been operational in China through its center at Shanghai. With the Chengdu Global Delivery Center up and running, xxx further strengthens its international and China presence, giving businesses access to an extensive and game-changing portfolio of IT and BPO services.
这里的presence译为地位应该没问题：进一步加强了其在国际上和在中国的地位
总之两处都不好措词，大家有何建议
Proposed translations
(Chinese)
| 4 +3 | 业务点；市场实力/市场份额 |
Dr JM Chen, PhD
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| 3 | 據點/市占率 |
Jenny Li
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Proposed translations
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19 hrs
Dr JM Chen, PhD
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
&
Chinese
United Kingdom
www.advancedchinesetranslations.com
Native in: Chinese 
, English
Works in: Chinese to English, English to Chinese
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业务点；市场实力/市场份额
我的理解是：第一处是说‘业务点’翻倍， 而第二处是指‘市场实力/市场份额’。
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據點/市占率
maybe the first one could be rendered as "據點" and the other could be "市占率". Just my suggestions. Hope could be helpful. :)
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