Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
Deep relaxation makes you always feel on top
Chinese translation:
在深度放松中带给您九天揽胜的感觉
Added to glossary by
Jason Ma
Mar 10, 2007 05:36
17 yrs ago
English term
China
Seasoned US hi-tech/management executive
Native in: English 
, Chinese
Works in: Chinese, Chinese to English, English to Chinese
feel on top
English to Chinese
Bus/Financial
Aerospace / Aviation / Space
airline advertising
"Deeper relaxation makes you always feel on top"
This is the headline of an airline advertisement.
Need creative Chinese interpretation of "feel on top"
At present, my versions are
更鬆弛的靜養令您永遠感到凌駕一切(掌握自如)(操縱自如)
welcome both tradition Chinese version and Simplified Chinese version to reflect the local culture.
Thank you all in advance.
This is the headline of an airline advertisement.
Need creative Chinese interpretation of "feel on top"
At present, my versions are
更鬆弛的靜養令您永遠感到凌駕一切(掌握自如)(操縱自如)
welcome both tradition Chinese version and Simplified Chinese version to reflect the local culture.
Thank you all in advance.
Proposed translations
(Chinese)
| 4 +5 | 在深度放松中带给您九天揽胜的感觉 |
Jason Ma
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| 3 | 騰雲駕霧，悠然自得 |
pkchan
|
Proposed translations
+5
42 mins
Selected
在深度放松中带给您九天揽胜的感觉
Trial version.
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Note added at 57 mins (2007-03-10 06:34:04 GMT)
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One more concise version: 身处九天，我心宁静。
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Note added at 1 hr (2007-03-10 06:42:32 GMT)
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在深度放鬆中帶給您九天攬勝的感覺 / 身處九天，我心寧靜
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Note added at 1 hr (2007-03-10 07:13:49 GMT)
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We can even go further and render it as “九天揽月，我心宁静”。
受到了Toyota的启发：Where there is road, there is Toyota / 车到山前必有路，有路必有丰田车。
个人感觉广告译文如果充分利用target culture 中耳熟能详的语句，效果好一点。
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Note added at 57 mins (2007-03-10 06:34:04 GMT)
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One more concise version: 身处九天，我心宁静。
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Note added at 1 hr (2007-03-10 06:42:32 GMT)
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在深度放鬆中帶給您九天攬勝的感覺 / 身處九天，我心寧靜
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Note added at 1 hr (2007-03-10 07:13:49 GMT)
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We can even go further and render it as “九天揽月，我心宁静”。
受到了Toyota的启发：Where there is road, there is Toyota / 车到山前必有路，有路必有丰田车。
个人感觉广告译文如果充分利用target culture 中耳熟能详的语句，效果好一点。
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Comment: "Thank you, Martin!"
11 hrs
騰雲駕霧，悠然自得
Deeper relaxation makes you always feel on top=騰雲駕霧，悠然自得
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